~Heartless~

name: Raiku Hearts

Gender:male

Age: 17(appears to be 21)

Race:Human

Home World:Destiny Island

Appearance: Raiku has some statistics of Riku but are a bit further off,his hair for one is white, grayish white,long, his eye color is green,he stands about 5'9,188 Lbs.
likes to wear the casual white clothing a nice buttoned down shirt at times,most of the times wears all black.


Personality: Raiku act's at times heartless towards new people but really kind to mainly girls, doesn't, like to fight a lot, he likes to be alone most of the times is not very social.
is some what smart,clever and will always try to out smart his adversaries with quick and timed speed to not make much of a fight(he really hates to go at it for no reason unless you get on his bad side)
he may sometimes have a weird ratio on his emotion's then mix up a lot.

Elemental Mastery: Futon,Raiton,Ice

Weapons: none yet

Fighting Style: Raiku prefers short range for it takes a bit for him to target an adversary at long.

Alignment: neutral

Affinities: helping people when in need,equaling out the sides,solving issues when and where ever he can,give morals on life and aid those in need and when in danger but over all he is somewhat of a hero but sometimes can be the down fall to others as he likes to change it up and go either way,good and evil.
can take advantage of his surrounds(like a water area,a snowy place or a place where thunder strikes most) can take an advantage of hand to hand (close combat) for he prefers to take it closely to take his adversary out faster


Weaknesses: Long range combat,fighting (when fights take to long to end) and also his emotion's some times get in his way.
fighting in certain areas (like volcano's beaches since his elements vary with much of his background)
his elements (sometimes his opponents may use one of his to where it throws him off track and he cannot react nor reply to the attack for its the same as his)
temptation he is quick to lose thought and site of one thing and choose what is better


History: he grew up in Destiny Island as one of the kids that were never known to be there so he one day decide to go on a journey of his own but one day got lost at sea was found by a few pirates fought for his freedom,sailed to new places learned a few new things and got a new prospective on the world(worlds) he has been on an uncharted area that has not been plotted yet but has made it home and decide with his new found powers return to the Islands to see what is new.as he returns to the Islands where everything started he pondered what will it be like now that he has returned what will be new will he see some new faces? as he plans for the future on the islands he thinks what if i could explore even more islands then this one...what if i could explore more worlds then this one...what if... his major goal was to find new things in life and he still continues to find that goal

Pictures:

Um he should be placed as neutral if he is both lawful and chaotic. Also I would suggest writing more affinities. It makes the admins happier. I like this charrie though

thanks for the tip's will do

*waves*

Hello and welcome to the site!

I'm one of the Admins, MrsGrizzley, I play Kairi. Roxas and Riku are busy with other projects right now.

Interesting character you have so far. I'm kind of curious as to why you seem to be basing him so strongly off Riku, at least visually. It's not a big deal, it's just going to make for some IC curiosity.

In point of fact I can already hear Kairi whispering that she's surprised every guy doesn't wanna look like Riku. But she's known to be rather biased on the issue.

As far as actual detail, just what Elements are "Futon" and "Raiton"? Ice is rather obvious, but I'm uncertain of the other two. And yes, we would like to see more detail in the Affinities and Weaknesses sections.

Grizz

alright ill get to work on fixing what is need.
and those two are fancy ways of saying water and thunder.
futon=water
raiton-thunder
i didn't know what way to say ice so i left it as so

Hello, I'm Roxas, MrsGrizzley's partner Admin in all this madness that we like to call "home". Welcome to our site!

um..hey?

Okay, looking over your additions . . .

Hmm . . .

So if someone throws Water, Thunder, or Ice at him he's gonna have a difficult time responding?

Also, some of your "Good Qualities" (Affinities) seem to be strangely phrased "Bad Qualities" (Weaknesses), like the Temptation thing which I really do not understand.

I'm all for using the occasional sentence fragment to emphasize a point, I do it sometimes myself, but in this case it's making things difficult to understand what it is that you actually mean to say.

Could you possibly explain this so that I can understand what you mean?

Grizz

ok um could you show me what i have to work on again i read your post but i am not understanding what i have to fix.

Grizz, hope you don't mind me helping out seeing as this past week has taken a severe toll on our sanity... XDDD

Alright, what she's asking about in your Affinities section ((what you are good at)) is the last sentence pertaining to temptation. Normally we see that stated as a flaw rather than being stated as a good thing. She just needed you to clarify about that...

Also, what we normally look for in Affinities are any unique skills or natural advantages your character has in battle, much like what you stated he's *not* good at in the Weakness section. Just keep the two reasonably balanced is all we ask.

Now my take on the..... his elements (sometimes his opponents may use one of his to where it throws him off track and he cannot react nor reply to the attack for its the same as his

I'm assuming, say I retaliate his Ice attack with a Water or Thunder, or Ice attack of my own, he's gonna be momentarily "Wtf?" before figuring out what his next attack should be? That's my understanding of it....


Hope this helps >>

sorry i now see my mistake i was going to place that in the weakness but placed it there sine this app was so long and it threw me off with all the fixing i had to do

Okay, I see where you've fixed it.

Now, would you like to add anything battle specific or good abilities he has in fighting? I noticed you have a bit listed in the bad qualities and just don't want to see the character taken advantage of. Much of his Good Qualities seem to be personality related.

For example, since fighting in areas opposite of his elements is a weakness, would areas such as being near the ocean or an arctic snow surrounding give him the upper hand?

Since he prefers close ranged fighting, would you say his actions are quicker, or uses perhaps gymnastic tactic like moves to throw off a close range target? ((may sound girlish, but after watching various FF and KH moves, there are just some that no male should never be able to perform, but DO! O.O))

Just some ideas to run by you before this gets finalized ^^

yeah so place that as a strength in the quantiles?
and um...sure ill try to make do with

Alright, looks good.

Approved!

Welcome to the Site and have fun!

Grizz

thanks